tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4991111627126775222.post4351607150972595987..comments2023-05-23T04:17:59.611-07:00Comments on Vegas Legacy: 1.1CrazyPlumbob915http://www.blogger.com/profile/09004826047267479961noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4991111627126775222.post-23912035110935557322011-09-07T13:43:15.266-07:002011-09-07T13:43:15.266-07:00Love the series.... its pretty amazing! Reading th...Love the series.... its pretty amazing! Reading the rest now!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4991111627126775222.post-28382908709861072582011-06-20T20:12:57.521-07:002011-06-20T20:12:57.521-07:00its good so far..u are really good at taking scree...its good so far..u are really good at taking screenshotsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4991111627126775222.post-77751156536311641422011-01-16T19:51:18.885-08:002011-01-16T19:51:18.885-08:00I won't be able to post long critique posts, s...I won't be able to post long critique posts, since your storie doesn't have a whole lot of text. However, i do like the imperfections you highlight in your founder. Being a dropout and what not, rather then making your character a Mary Sue. Other then that really, a short chapter, so a short critique. <br /><br /> Good start though<br /><br />- MontanaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4991111627126775222.post-41129526902690944782010-12-04T16:28:28.939-08:002010-12-04T16:28:28.939-08:00I like it :)I like it :)Tino380' s bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17209814116605830402noreply@blogger.com